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By Arleen Sessions Bogue
The quiet hand of trust,
The busy hand of making,
And two hands clasped in prayer
First thing upon awaking;
The happiness of giving
Without possessive fear;
The peace in the forgiving
Of someone who is dear;
A humble place of learning
Truth in words and deeds;
A constant faith that heaven
Will supply our needs;
Reciprocating smiles
While each performs his part;
The warmth of being wanted
By some loving heart;
A place to hurry back to
And know as you are known;
The spark of inspiration;
These make a house, a home.
(1955)
This is now printed and on my wall.
I think I’m going to make it pretty and frame it for the living room.
This is such a lovely poem, but I felt impulsed to revise a few irregular phrases to make the meter more consistent:
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By Arleen Sessions Bogue (gently revised by Jared Bernotski)
The quiet hand of trust,
The busy hand of making,
And hands that clasp in prayer
First thing upon awaking;
The generous who give
Without possessive fear;
The peace to quick forgive
Each someone we hold dear;
A humble place of learning,
With truth the flow’r it feeds;
A constant faith that heav’n
Will yet supply our needs;
Reciprocating smiles
While all perform their parts;
The warmth of being wanted,
Bright love that lightens hearts;
A place to hurry back to
And know as you are known;
The spark of inspiration;
These make a house, a home.
(1955 and 2015)
Thanks, Jared.